Unit 16篇章翻译(四)

Unit 16 篇章翻译（四）

课时：

2H

教学目的要求：

了解如何使用各种技巧进行篇章的翻译。

教学重点：

把握在语篇翻译中使用各种翻译技巧，了解关于教育内容的语篇翻译。

教学难点：

根据翻译的要求，可采用不同的策略，如编译等。

教学内容：

Part I:

[背景知识：关于中国教育]

Since 1949 when the Peopl e’s Republic of China was founded, the Chinese government has always placed education high on its agenda, and has promulgated multiple codes to safeguard the educational rights of its people, especially of ethnic groups, children, women and the disabled. Through uninterrupted efforts over the past five decades, China has made significant progress in its educational sector.

The nine-year compulsory education is being implemented nationwide in stages in a planned way. Primary schooling has been popularized in areas inhabited by 91% of the Chinese population. Higher education, occupational and polytechnic education, diversified adult education and ethnic education have been developing rapidly. All this have contributed to the formation of a multi-tiered, diversified and discipline-inclusive educational system in China and facilitated the cross-border communication and cooperation in the educational sector.

广东外语艺术职业学院是2001年经广东省人民政府批准建立的专科层次的全日制普通高等学校，主要为广东省基础教育承担培养培训外语、艺术、信息技术类教师的任务, 同时为社会发展需要培养各类专门人才。(Division) Guangdong Teachers College of Foreign Language and Arts is a public full-time institute of higher education, whose establishment was approved by Guangdong Provincial Government. It aims at nurturing and training teachers of English, arts, information technology for elementary (basic) education in Guangdong as well as all kinds of professionals demanded by the society.

学院在“广东外国语师范学校”和“广东艺术师范学校”的基础上组建而成, 拥有两个校区，校园花木葱茏，环境优美。作为原广东省教育厅直属的重点师范学校，重组前两校已有17年大专办学历史，积累了基础教育师资培养和培训的丰富经验。20多年来两校为社会培养了大量优秀的英语和艺术教育教学人才，其中不少毕业生已成为当地教育部门的领导、教学科研骨干和学术带头人，为发展教育事业做出了突出贡献，得到各地教育行政部门及社会各界人士的高度赞誉。

The College, established by merging Guangdong Foreign Language Teachers

School and Guangdong Teachers School of Arts, is composed of two sub-campuses, both of which have a pleasant environment with green grass and fresh air.

As the key teachers school under the direct leadership of former Guangdong Department of Education, both schools have offered college programs for 17 years, accumulating rich experience in teacher preparation and on-the-job training for teachers. Over the last two decades, a large number of outstanding students of English education and art education have graduated from the College, many of whom have become the backbones of the local educational bureau and the pillars of educational and academic research. They enjoy a reputation for their tremendous contribution to education.

Pillar: an active and important member of a particular field

学院设外语系、音乐系、美术系、学前教育系、信息技术系、中文系、基础部、现代教育技术中心和继续教育学院，开展全日制和成人学历教育。各类在校生近5000人。学院师资队伍年富力强、治学严谨、教学经验丰富、科研能力较强。(Adaptation) 现有专职教师264人，其中正、副教授71人，博士、硕士59人，具有中国和英、美、澳大利亚、新西兰、泰国等不同国家的广泛的国际教育背景，教师的作品分别被人民大会堂、毛主席纪念堂、瑞士博物馆等场馆收藏。此外，学院还聘有10名外籍教师。

The College possesses the Department of Foreign Language, the Department of Music, the Department of Fine Arts, the Department of Preschool Education, the Department of Information Technology, the Department of Chinese Language and Culture, the Center for Modern Educational Technology and the School of Continuing Education. Currently, there are about 5000 part-time and full-time students in the College.

The college is noted for a competent teaching staff with rich teaching experience and varied academic achievements. There are 264 full-time teachers, including 71 professors and associate professors, 59 doctors and masters. A lot of them have furthered their studies in Britain, the United States, Australia, New Zealand and Thailand. Some teache rs’ works are collected in the Great Hall of the People, the Chairman Mao Memorial Hall and the Museum of Switzerland. Furthermore, there are more than ten international teachers in the College each year.

Works: He pulled out a large green volume containing all of Chopin’s works.

[策略点拨：编译（Adaptation）]

Adaptation: The translation recasts the original so as to have the desired impact on an audience that is substantially different from that of the original; as when an adult text is adapted for children, a written text is adapted for television.

Part II:

上海外国语大学是中国教育部直属的一所高等外国语学校。自1981年开始招收外国留学生。1985年正式成立对外汉语系和留学生办公室，1995年改建为国际文化交流学院。留学生分别来自日本、韩国、美国、法国、瑞士等国家，人数逐年增多，现在在读的本科生有300多名，非学位留学生近400人。

Shanghai International Studies University is a foreign language institution of higher learning directly under the Ministry of Education of the People’s Republic of China. It began to enroll international students in 1981 and established the Department of Chinese as a Foreign Language and the International Students Office in 1985, which were reorganized into the College of International Cultural Exchange in 1995. International students come from Japan, Korea, the United States, France, Switzerland and other countries. The number of enrollment is on the increase each year. At present, some 300 undergraduate students are studying at the college, and the number of non-degree students is around 400.

[点拨与思考：外语院校名称的翻译]

广东外语外贸大学Guangdong University of Foreign Studies

西安外国语学院Xi’an International Studies University

四川外国语学院Sichuan International Studies University

北京外国语大学Beijing Foreign Studies University

北京语言文化大学Beijing Language and Culture University

上海外国语大学Shanghai International Studies University

由于是综合型外语院校，因此，都没有出现foreign language 的字眼，而用international studies, 覆盖的学科更广泛。

为外国留学生开设的必修课有：精读、听力、会话、泛读、新闻听力、报刊阅读、古典文学、现代文学、翻译等。选修课包括中国哲学、历史、经济、贸易、民俗、书法、绘画等。有的选修课可根据学生需要用外语授课。

（摘自孙万彪《中级翻译教程》267）

Required courses offered to the international students include Intensive Reading, Listening Comprehension, Conversation, Extensive Reading, Listening Comprehension of News Broadcast, Newspaper Reading, Classical Literature, Modern Literature, and Translation. Optional courses include Chinese Philosophy, History, Economy, Trade, Folklore, Calligraphy and Painting. Some of them may be taught in a language other than Chinese suited to the needs of the international students.

Exercise: Please translate the following passages into English.

中山大学三个校区分别坐落在珠江之畔、南海之滨，总面积达5.04平方公里。广州南校区树木葱笼，绿草如茵；广州北校区林路蔓蔓，曲径通幽；珠海校区依山面海，景色宜人，均是不可多得的读书治学的胜境。（中山大学中文网页资料）

Zhongshan University has three campuses which cover a total area of 5.04 square kilometers. Guangzhou South Campus and Guangzhou North Campus are located

south and north of the Pearl River, while Zhuhai Campus lies to the west of the South China Sea. All three are beautiful campuses with avenues of green trees and patches of lush grass, providing pleasant environments for study and research. （中山大学英文网页资料，张美芳译）

Lush: plants, trees, gardens, etc. that are healthy and growing well and thickly

[知识补充：关于教育]

《中华人民共和国学位条例》

“Regulations Concerning Academic Degrees in the People's Republic of China”

结业证书Certificate of Completion

毕业证书Certificate of Graduation

肄业证书Certificate of Completion/Incompletion/ Attendance/Study

教育学院College/Institute of Education

中学Middle[Secondary] School

师范学校Normal School[upper secondary level]

师范专科学校Normal Specialised Postsecondary College

师范大学Normal[Teachers] University

公正书Notarial Certificate

专科学校Postsecondary Specialised College

广播电视大学Radio and Television University

中等专科学校Secondary Specialised School

自学考试Self-Study Examination

技工学校Skilled Workers[Training] School

业余大学Spare-Time University

职工大学Staff and Workers University

大学University(regular,degree-granting)

职业大学V ocational University

摘自冯建中，《实用英语口译教程》

重点学科key disciplinary areas (KDA)

科教兴国战略the strategy of revitalizing/ invigorating China through science and technology

教育界the educational circles

教师资格证书制度the teacher s’ certificate system

培养德、智、体全面发展的建设者和接班人to train builders and successors who are well-developed morally, intellectually and physically

教育要面向现代化，面向世界，面向未来Education must serve/meet the needs of modernization, the world and the future.

有理想、有道德、有文化、守纪律的劳动者working people/ workers with revolutionary/lofty ideals, sound morals, good education and a

strong sense of discipline

德才兼备to excel in both moral integrity and professional ability

to excel morally and professionally

教书育人to educate the person as well as impart book knowledge (tell or give)

优秀教师outstanding teachers

优等生honour students

完成九年制义务教育to complete nine-year compulsory education

应试教育exam-dominated education; exam-oriented education;

素质教育all-round education; quality-/development-/ qualification-oriented education

复合型人才versatile talents

助学金stipend

颁发奖学金to award scholarships

专业设置curriculum

备新课to prepare new courses

公开课open class/lecture

启发式elicitation method/ heuristic method

填鸭式教学法cramming method of education/teaching

选修课optional/ elective courses

必修课required/ compulsory courses

学分制credit system

成绩单school report

学习成绩school record/ academic record

听课to attend a lecture, to visit a class, to observe a lesson

研讨会、讨论会seminar

毕业实习graduation field work, to go out on internships

开学典礼inauguration ceremony

毕业典礼commencement/ graduation ceremony

commencement is a ceremony at a university in which graduates formally

receive their degrees

岗前培训pre-service training

在职培训on-the-job training/ in-service training

高中阅读长句分析与翻译

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英语四级篇章翻译训练及答案

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大学英语四级长句翻译方法及技巧

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