Marking Code
/\ Word(s) missing
- Omit word
C Capitalization
Gd Good
O Organisation
P Punctuation
PE Poorly expressed
R Register/Formality
SS Sentence Structure
S Spelling
T Tip
WF Wrong form
WO Word order
WT Wrong tense
WW Wrong word
Writing Class: Informal Letter
Task Type: Informal Letter
Question
You have received the following letter from your English penfriend:
I'm really pleased you're planning to come to England to study. Let me know what type of course you're interested in and I'll ring some colleges for details. The more information you can give me the better!
Write your letter of reply to your penfriend (around 140-190 words). Makeover: Yanina
Read Yanina's answer to this question below. Try correcting the piece of writing yourself ?rst: use the marking codes to think about what might be wrong (or what's good) about the piece of work. Then when you're ready, click the green buttons in the text for our feedback.
Dear July,
Thanks for your letter and sorry for not replying sooner. Gd Modal
You see, I've been planning this for a long time and I came WT Modal to a WW Modal conclusion: I want to take up singing classes in London!
What's cool is that I don't want to join a common class, but a group of people that expresses itself through the - Modal music and lets its spirit free while singing. I'm really excited about this, and I'd love to have your opinion about it. It'd be fantastic if you could search for the appropriate singing classes in the city for me. Gd Modal Just check the prices well and give me the schedule of each place. PE Modal
I guess the best place to stay is in a house with a host family, but if you've got a better idea, let me know. I think I'll stay for two months, the problem is that I'm not sure if I can a?ord all the spends! WW Modal That's one of the things of WW Modal London that get WF Modal on my nerves: everything is SO expensive!
Ok, I've got to go now, so... see you soon!
With love,
Yan
Feedback
Your letter has enough information (about the course, location, etc) for your friend to be able to help you. The informal register (which you achieve through the use of contracted forms, such as 'It'd', exclamation marks and a nice, chatty style) is just right for this type of letter. Your control of language is generally very good, with only a couple of minor errors. Good work!