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五种任务型写作

五种任务型写作
五种任务型写作

任务型写作

(一)现象解释型议论文

现在越来越多的学生在考试中作弊,请按下面的要求写作.

1)学生作弊现象越来越严重;

2)作弊的原因;

3)如何杜绝作弊。

We have witnessed that many students cheat in exams. According to the report of related authorities(有关当局), cheating in exams is becoming more and more serious.

Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon. To begin with, some students are under great pressure from parents and they fear to fail in the exams or fall behind others. Moreover, some are too lazy and want to pass the exams without efforts. In addition, some cheat to get high scores and scholarships. As a result, the problem of cheating in exams becomes very serious.

As to me, cheating in exams can be stopped if we take the following measures. First of all, we should explain the harm of cheating to the students. Besides, punishment should be given to those who have been found cheating. To conclude, education and punishment are effective ways to stop cheating.

过渡句

1.描述现象

(1) Nowadays Internet has become an important part of people’s life . 当今网络已成为人们生活中的重要部分。

(2) Nowadays more and more people have private cars. 当今越来越多的人拥有私家车。

2. 分析原因:

(1) Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. 原因可以被列出如下。

(2) The reasons why people study abroad are varied. 人们出国学习的原因各不相同。

3. 采取措施:

(1) I think we can take the following measures to stop pollution.

我认为我们可以采取以下措施来阻止污染.

(2) It is high time that we should take some effective measures to solve this problem.

是我们采取有效措施来解决这个问题的时候了。

(3) It is high time that we took steps to save wather. 是我们应该采取措施节约水资源的时候了

(二) 利弊型议论文

现在越来越多的学生在出国留学,请按下面的要求写作.

1) 出国留学有什么好处.

2) 出国留学有什么弊端.

3) 你的看法.

Nowadays more and more young people are going to study abroad. Like everything else, studying abroad has both favorable and unfavorable aspects.

Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows. Firstly, they think by attending a college in a foreign country they can learn not only useful knowledge, but also the culture and

customs of other nations. Secondly, they can take advantage of this opportunity to gain a good command of the foreign language. Moreover, they can meet different people and experience different cultures, which may help to broaden their views.

Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. First, the costs are much higher than those in their native country. Most overseas students have to work for a living. What’s worse, they may feel very lonely.

Through above analysis, we can see that the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I am in favor of going abroad to study.

过渡句

1.表示利弊

(1). Pressure has both advantages and disadvantages. 压力有利也有弊。

(2). Nowadays, many people prefer to shop on line. Generally, its advantages can be seen as

follows. 现在很多人喜欢在网上购物。通常它有如下优点。

(3). As an old saying goes, every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are also obvious. 但是正如

常言所说,任何事物都有两面性,它的缺点也很明显。

2.得出结论及看法:

(1). From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the

advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages

通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论:自行车的优点远大于缺点。

(2). Therefore, we can make it clear from the above discussion that perseverance can overcome

any difficulty. 因此,由上面的讨论我们可以明白坚持不懈可以克服任何困难。

(3). All in all, I am fully convinced that to study in another city is really a good way to enrich one’s life experience. 总之,我坚信到另外一个城市学习是丰富我们个人经历的好法。(4).As far as I am concerned, change your attitude when you find the environment unchangeable. 就我而言,当你发现环境没办法改变时你应该改变你的心态。

(三)观点论证型议论文

中学生是否可以做兼职

1)你认为中学生可以做兼职吗? 为什么?

2)针对现在中学生从事兼职工作的现象, 你有什么建议?

Taking part-time jobs

In American, more and more high school students take part-time jobs. As for teenage girls, babysitting is a popular choice for them, and boys can take more kinds of part-time jobs, such as delivering newspapers.

I think taking part-time jobs is a good idea for high school students. Firstly, the part-time job can offer them opportunities to go beyond what they have been taught in class, and they will learn something that doesn’t exist in books but in practice. Secondly, students can also get work experience through part-time jobs, which will benefit their future job-hunting. Thirdly, part-time jobs can partly relieve students’ financial burden, especially those who are from poor families.

Of course, it’s an important fact that students shouldn’t break the balance between their jobs and studies. So I think students should spend only their spare time taking part-time jobs.

过渡句

1. 发表个人看法:

(1). As for me, I am firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited for the following reasons. 就我而言,我坚定地认为国外旅游者的数量应得到限制,理由如下:(2). In my opinion, I don’t think it a good idea to give kids too much pocket money.

依我来看,我认为给小孩太多零花钱不是一个好主意。

(3).As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me.

就我所知,下列方法对我有很大帮助。

(4) As far as I am concerned, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to our health. 就我而言,打电子游戏既花时间又有害健康。

(5).For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons: 我同意后者,理由如下:

2. 提出建议:

(1). We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环

境。

(2). At the same time, students should be encouraged to take part in more outdoor activities. 同时

应该鼓励学生多参加户外活动。

(四)举例论证型议论文

同外国人说英语

1. 叙述你的一次真实或虚构的同外国人说英语的经历

2.详细描述这次经历的时间,地点,经过和结果。

3.经历此事后的感想。

The writer tells us about his first experience to speak English with a foreigner. The writer felt nervous at first for lack of confidence, but he got it over in the end.

I also had the same experience as the writer. On a Sunday morning last summer, I was walking in the park with my parents when I saw two foreigners. I heard them speaking English. I wanted to practise my spoken English, so I went up to them. When I did open my mouth to speak, something embarrassing happened. I told myself not to make any grammar mistakes in my speaking. The more I tried to speak well, the more mistakes I made. I was so nervous that I blushed with shame. Later, I had to run away.

So when we speak with a foreigner, we should be confident about ourselves. Forget all about the grammar and don’t be afaid of making mistakes. Only in this way can we have a pleasant talk with foreigners.

过渡句

1. 举例说明:

(1). This story reminds me of a similar experience of my niece. 这个故事使我想想我侄子的相

似经历。

(2). There are many examples to show that success comes from hard work. 有很多例子能够证明

成功来自努力。

(3). In life there are many such touching stories. 生活中有许多这样的感人例子。

2. 感想或启示:

(1). From the story, we learn that we must take everything seriously and keep a modest attitude towards our studies or work. 从这个故事中,我们知道我们必须认真对待每一件事情,对我们的学习和工作要采取谦虚的态度。

(2). From the above two stories, we can see that nothing is impossible and that hard work creates

miracles! 从以上的两则故事我们可以看出一切皆有可能,努力创造奇迹。

(3). After reading it, I was shocked and at the same time I felt sorry for myself. 读完之后,我很震

惊,同时也为自己感到遗憾。

(4). Inspired by the story, I suddenly realized the importance of independence. 在这则故事的刺

激下,我突然意识到独立的重要性。

(五)正反观点型议论文

正确对待考试失败

(1)我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败

(2)有些同学失考试失败后, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力.

(3) 而大多数同学考试失败时, 分析失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信。

(4) 你的观点。

We middle school students have had many tests or exams. We have both achieved success and suffered from failure. Different students take different attitudes to failure.

Some fall in low spirits when they don’t do well in the exams. They usually lose heart and no longer study as hard as before.

However, most students take an active attitude towards failure. They encourage themselves to be self-confident. They find out and analyze the causes of failure so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.

As for me, I agree with those with active attitudes. As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great men may have failed many times before they succeeded. So we must deal with failure correctly and learn from failure to make progress and achieve success.

过渡句

人们不同观点:

(1).The opinions about failure vary from person to person. Some think that failure is bad for them. ……. But others think that it does good to them. 不同的人对失败有不同的看法。一些人认为失败对他们有害。……但是另外一些人认为失败对他们有好处。

(2). Different people hold different attitudes towards their weaknesses. Some will feel upset and discouraged. ………However, others will face their weaknesses bravely. 不同的人对待他们的弱点有不同的态度。一些人感到伤心和失望。…….. 然而另外一些人却勇敢地面对他们的弱点。

(3). There are different answers to this question. Some people believe that money is everything, but some others argue that money is the roots of all evil. 人们对这个问题有不同的答案。一些人认为金钱就是一切,但另外一些人认为金钱是万恶之源。

模仿写作:

(一)电脑游戏

1)现在电脑游戏在校园很流行;

2)为什么电脑游戏会给人们带来危害;

3)怎样正确对待电脑游戏。

Personal computer has become a common part of people's life. And playing computer games on campus has always aroused the greatest concern. What impresses us most is that computer games do harm to us.

The reasons why computer games are harmful are varied. Among the various reasons, waste of time plays an important role. That is to say, playing computer games takes us a lot time and when we are addicted to it, we will have little time for our study. What is worse, those who play computer games day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep. For example, many students become shortsighted because of indulging in playing computer games.

When talking about how to deal with computer games, I think it's up to us to resist the temptation of games. On the one hand, we shouldn't spend too much time, energy or money on the games because study is our main task. On the other hand, we should try to learn something while playing them occasionally. In conclusion, we should try to avoid the harm of computer games and live a more meaningful life.

(二)“黄金周”

1) “黄金周”给人们带来什么好处

2) 同时“黄金周”有哪些弊端

3) 你的看法

China’s tourism market has been developing steadily and rapidly since the “Golden Week”holiday system was set up. Like everything else, the “Golden week” holiday has both favorable and unfavorable aspects.

Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows. First of all, it can raise consumption. Therefore, it benefits tourism, transportation, hotels and other industries related to tourism. Moreover, it can give people time to have a rest and go sightseeing.

Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. First, the increasing tourism often causes traffic jams. Besides, there are thousands of tourists at scenic spots, railway stations and airports, which causes some overcrowding and safety problems.

In a word , the advantages of the “Golden Week”outweigh its disadvantages. After all, it greatly benefits our country’s economy.

(三)城市的交通问题

(1)你认为城市最好的交通工具是什么?为什么?(至少给出两个理由)

(2)你对汽车时代的来临有什么看法?

Travel by bike in the city

In this passage, the writer explains the advantages and disadvantages of owning private cars in the city. He agrees that the increase in private car sales is good for our country’s economy.

But I think bikes should be the most popular form of transportation in the city. First, a bike is

much cheaper than a car, so most consumers can afford it. Second, bikes need much less parking space than cars. The third reason is that it can save energy for our country. Moreover, it brings no pollution to the air, so it helps to clean the atmosphere. Therefore, the best form of transportation is traveling by bike, which is a healthy, “green” and economical way.

But with the development of our economy, the day when we use cars as the most popular form of transportation is sure to come. We should take advantage of private cars and make them serve us better. Meanwhile, we hope that satisfactory solutions to these negative problems will be found soon.

(四)青少年庆祝生日

(1)你的朋友或同学是如何庆祝生日的

(2)讲述一次你最难忘的生日经历

(3)提出一些有意义的生日庆祝方式

The passage shows us the different opinions between the author and her husband on celebrating birthdays. Also the author tells us her unforgettable experiences of celebrating her birthday at 12 and 17.

Most of my classmates celebrate their birthdays every year. Some hold a birthday party at home or a restaurant, inviting teachers, friends or even all of their classmates, while some invite classsmates to KTV for singing and dancing in order to celebrate their birthdays.

However, my most unforgettable birthday is different from those. My birthday is during the summer holiday. Last year, when my birthday was approaching, my parents gave me some money and asked me to travel to Hangzhou by myself. That was the first time that I had traveled alone. I learned a lot from that experience.

Therefore, I suggest teenagers choose more meaningful patterns to celebrate their birthdays, such as preparing a dinner for parents or doing some voluntary jobs on their birthdays, which will benefit us a lot during our lifetime.

(五)快餐

(1)有人赞成吃快餐,因为方便,省时,环境和服务好

(2)有人反对吃快餐,因为不营养,价格高

(3)你的看法

Fast food

With the fast pace of people’s living, fast food is becoming more and more popular, especially in the USA. Of all fast food restaurants, McDonald’s is probably the most famous and popular. People who like fast food say it is very convenient and saves a lot of time, which is very important in the modern society. You just go into a fast food restaurant and order your food which will be ready in no time. What’s more, in fast food restaurants, you can enjoy the clean and comfortable environment and excellent service.

On the other hand, there are some others who are against eating fast food. They argue that fast food has too much sugar and fat, and eating it too much is bad for one’s health. Also, the price of this kind of food sometimes is a little high in China.

In my opinion, although cooking at home is time-consuming, it offers healthy meals that your body needs. Fast food is only a good choice when you are very busy.

Blood donation

1.有些人认为献血有害健康

2.实际情况并非如此

3.应采取措施促进献血

Blood donation

Nowadays, there is a commonly held belief that donating blood will do harm to a person’s life. Actually, it is not the real case.

For one thing, the small amount of blood donated will be recovered in a short time. For another, with the development of medical science, it is much safer and more convenient now for people to donate blood. Most important of all, donating blood can help save the lives of dying patients, which is significant to the whole society.

We need to carry out several measures to promote blood donation. First, we should impart medical knowledge to common citizens, convincing them that blood donation is not dangerous at all. Second, we should help people realize that helping others is equal to helping ourselves, not only because it is a virtue to be ready to help others, but also because one day we will be those in need of help.

出国留学

(1)现在越来越多的学生出国留学。

(2)你认为花那么多钱出国留学值得吗?为什么?

(3)如果有机会,你会不会出国留学?

Nowadays, more and more Chinese students choose to study abroad, which I think is not worthwhile for the following reasons. Firstly, many people just follow the popularity blindly without good career plans. Besides, with so high cost, some returnees from overseas can’t find good jobs as easily as they expect. Finally, studying abroad doesn’t mean that all the returnees from overseas are more capable than those who study in China.

If I were given a chance to study abroad by spending a lot of money, I would not go because I would rather use this money as funds to start a business. People should think carefully before going to study abroad.

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