2012年2月GMAT考试作文AA机经(2.23)

2012年2月GMAT考试作文AA机经(2.23)

GMAT考试已于2012年1月29日更换题库，以下是2012年1月的GMAT作文AA 部分机经更新，更新日期从12年1月29日起至2月22日，目前共44题。

本次更新从24题开始，前题请参考GMAT考试机经更新汇总1月29日更新。

24. 【4次】(By Kiarawang)Country W’s revenue use to rely on tourism income. The revenue of tourism in W decreased last five years, 有人认为是因为industry pollution 导致旅游业下滑。因此有人建议：既然W的旅游业不行了，而且在W最大的几个公园里有地下矿藏，那么就关闭公园开发矿藏吧，这样W的收入才能上来。

25. 【5次】-by v1vian77

The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile manufact uring company to the company’s managers:“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the belief that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and ou r overall profits would increase as well.”

Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.

27. 【1次】by alancui

是说motorcycle的厂商准备将他的luxury的产品线裁掉，因为是hand making的，没有standard motorcycle用的robot的production line efficiently，因此裁掉luxury的，搞standard的会给公司创造更多的利润

28. 【1次】by fangzikai

是工厂一开始增加luxurious的展出,获得高的sales，后来加强了inexpensive的展出，sale下降，所以为了吸引更多消费者什么的，就有增加展台中luxurious的产品，会有更多人看，所以吸引更多人买。

29. 【4次】by 4567

是一个Easy Credit Company 想要通过在卡上放环保组织的标志以达到留住老顾客、吸引新顾客、增加利润的目的。

30. 【3次】by wangbixuan0216

一个国家年前举办了一个soccer competition，之后the number of tourists visiting the country increase. 然后有个人就说将来应该多举办类似的woldwide comptition来继续刺激

当地旅游发展和经济发展

31. 【1次】by bettybad

好像是说一个accounting software，产professional software, 和personal software，pro的软件市场占有率挺好，但是个人软件就不好，被对手压榨了(。。。)，然后这个公司就想说，通过一个调查，把在pro 软件上先进的部分用在home user里，这样才能提高个人软件的销量。

32. 【2次】by afeitaofang

software design为了increase profits应该和auto industry一样，把员工换成临时工......

33. 【1次】by caixiaoxuan

大概意思：雇主应该有权利去监督员工不良的习惯，包括在工作地方和员工私下生活上

以上就是2012年2月22日更新的GMAT作文机经AA部分，考生可以适当借鉴，并通过练习来掌握GMAT作文的解题规律，从而顺利通过GMAT考试。

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