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托福作文185题

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1. why people attend college?

people attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,

career preparation, increased knowledge). why do you think people attend college or university?

use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』

说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野

为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机

会父母要求子女上大学别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书找不到工作

(无知，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险

运动亦如是[43]。)

相关题目：[168]

『范文』

after graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work

force. most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding

jobs (they attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for

advancement in an increasingly competitive job market. before attending college, students have a

limited opportunity to specialize. after obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be

competitive for previously unavailable jobs. for instance, applicants with computer science

degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well

prepared for

any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. with a larger range of potential jobs to choose from,

degree holders

are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.

additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. for example,

many

companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher

salaries to attract

them. even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores,

employers may still place

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a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a

well-known

university. because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of

competence in a

given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also

command higher

salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.

finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to

jobs with a

clear path towards professional advancement. a b.s. in biology, for example, could allow a

student to find a job

in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. the same

major could also

be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. both of these avenues would be

unavailable without

taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.

2. are parents the best teachers? do you agree or disagree with the following statement? parents

are the best teachers. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

因观点绝对而不能同意。

不是所有的父母都是好老师

最好的老师不仅仅是父母

有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知

z有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响

『范文』

obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are

generally most concerned about the development of their children. however, it is not completely

true to say that parents are the best teachers.

first of all, not all parents are good teachers. as normal individuals, some parents more or less

have some bad habits. even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating

their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. another

deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of

education. all too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream

by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. ironically, when their children do

not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. in

fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses

moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones.

when children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of

teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school.

but the situation will not last long. we live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by

multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. therefore, to be a

professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. no parent

is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. wise

parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. they are aware of the

possibility outside the family.

parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. most parts

of children education are virtually beyond teachers reaches. it is parents that supplement.

psychology studies have shown us that parents love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to

their children. albeit einsteins mother and that of forest gump are both good examples. on the

other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. the natures of

those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted.

in a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.

3. does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?

nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. has this change improved the way people live?

use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.『分析』

总体上，―食物变得越来越容易准备‖是一种进步[37]，所以自然会带来improvement。使人们

的生活方式发

生了一些变化：好的：

节省时间，越来越方便，一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来

也有不好的变化：

准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减

少

了，比如―速冻饺子‖[quick-frozen dumpling]

快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是，人们普遍变胖了，尤其是孩子

相关题目：[13]

『范文』

people today can prepare their meal much easier than has ever been before. to prepare a single

dinner,provident housewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they had to buy home dirty

vegetables which had to wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth. each and every step of

preparation was a time-consuming task. but now, things are entirely different. supermarkets

provide vegetables and meat clean and neat, some of them even have relevant ingredients and

need only a few minutes to be made into delicious meals. and this change has indeed greatly

improved the way people live. in a sense, food preparation is no longer a tedious task, at least

much easier to tolerate. such a change has liberated many women and given them chance to do

more meaningful things, for example, a higher pay job or a more respectful one. on the other hand,

more men are becoming willing to do the thing that they once hated so much, and in some cases such transformation of men brought dramatic positive impact on the family. today, its not hard to imagine a wife comes home after a days hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has already prepared her several her favorite dishes! children can more easily become independent—at least they can make themselves breakfasts or dinners when parents are

occasionally not present. but such a change has also brought some unexpected consequences. girls nowadays are becoming more and more reluctant to deem household work as their

responsibility. the reason is quite straightforward: it was once really ridiculous to insist men do trivial household work rather than go work and earn money to support family, but conditions have altered now, girls might think: i can work as well, or maybe i can earn a higher salary than you do, dear boy friend, if you want to marry me, answer me one question first, will you prepare me breakfast and dinner every day? and some boys, on the other hand, are becoming hesitant to get married, or simply remain solitary, among miscellaneous reasons they do so is one thing: i can take care of myself, at least i dont really need someone prepare me dinner! anyway, such a

change is positive and it did improve the quality of peoples life. at least it has brought girls, boys, husbands, wives, children and everyone else who has to prepare food an opportunity, no matter what kind of

opportunity it is.

4. which is more important, book knowledge or experience?

it has been said, not everything that is learned is contained in books. compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. in your opinion, which source is

more important? why?

『分析』

注意一定要先进行比较

从书本中获取的知识

优点：

题材、范围更多

有更多的深度

更加的系统

缺点：

有时过于教条

也不见得完全准确

从经验中获取的知识

优点：

获取直接、简单明了

更加地实用

有些知识无法从书本中获得

缺点：

不系统，很大的随意性

很容易产生片面理解

不一定要说a比b更重要，或者b比a更重要。也可以选择在不同的情况下，有不同的比较。学习抽象

的知识，书本是最好的来源。学习游泳，这只能靠经验。另外，大

多数的知识要书本经验相

结合才可

以。

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有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习，比如，语言，体育

有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习，比如，物理、化学、历史、

地理

有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习，比如销售技巧；管

理技巧

所以不能一概而论(treat different things/problems/matters] as the same)，要看学什么，以及学习的阶段。

『范文』

in general, knowledge gained from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. we now live in a world that typophile is no longer exorbitant, and that printed matters are readily available. in libraries, we can learn nearly everything only if we have already acquired basic

reading skills, philosophy, history, literature, physics, mathematics, chemicals, biology, geography, anthropology, and the list will go on. unlike the experience of an individual that is limited by the range of that individual, books seem to have almost no limitation. sitting in the local library, we virtually can travel everywhere through an interesting geographic encyclopedia, and certainly, with nearly no expense at all. on the other hand, it can be argued that sometimes knowledge

gained from experience is much deeper and more comprehensive than that gained from books. it is quite true that not every thing is contained in books. how to deal with personal finance, how to cope with current social trends, even how to most effectively organize our own mind, and

numerous other things can seldom be found thoroughly and comprehensively discussed in books, we have to gain the knowledge by our own experience. and the sad news is that even some knowledge that is contained in books usually needs further comprehension, mainly through experience. as to which source is more important, the answers vary. some knowledge can be acquired only through books. its hard to imagine we can have a good understanding of history without reading books. on the other hand, some knowledge can be obtained only through experience. when we try to learn to swim, merely a detailed manual of swimming skills, even abundantly filled with illustrations, is at most useless. we have to jump into the water and then gain the knowledge with experience. we have to use books and experience as source

simultaneously to get what we want to know. take learning physics for example, both books and experiences are equally important sources, and examples as such are numerous.

therefore, i think whether one source is more important than

the other depends on circumstances.

5. the advantages and disadvantages of a new factory near

your community

a company has announced that it wishes to build a large

factory near your community. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. do

you support or oppose the

factory? explain your position.

『分析』

先讨论―假设工厂真的落成了，而带来的好处和坏处‖，而后发表看法。

好处：

直接增加了就业机会(到工厂去上班)；间接增加了就业机会(会有很

多服务业，比如饭店、商店、

超市等等跟着开业)

如果工厂规模足够大，物流规模也足够大，那么将最终成为交通改

善的起点

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158. should we pay attention to the opinions of famous people?

when famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. do

you think we should pay attention to these opinions? use specific reasons and examples to support your

answer.

『分析』

观点：大多数时候，没必要听这些人的话。因为他们往往不是专家。然而也不能走向绝对，这些人的意见

在某些时候也是对的，或者值得关注的。比如在一些场合中：慈善

演出(charities; charitable institution;

charitable performance)。

『范文』

it is only in the last hundred years that the star phenomenon was born. prior to 1900, there were no famous

entertainers in todays sense. fame was held for political officers. however, today, the people who appear before us

either on a court, a stage, a field or a screen, are in fact more famous than many political officers. many people

listen to these famous people and act as if their word was gospel. however, i do not think this is correct behavior.

stars should be treated with respect, but their opinions should not count for any more than a regular persons

opinion. becoming a star does not automatically endow a person with limitless knowledge. stars must do research

to form their opinions, just like the rest of us. it is no more or less likely that a star will have a valid opinion on a

subject than a friend from school.

in many cases, when stars state their opinions, they are not telling the world how they truly feel. many

famous people will only make announcements that their publicists have approved. therefore, in many cases, it is

not the stars opinions that we are hearing at all, but in fact, that of the corporations that they work for.

i believe that the only time that we should really value the opinion of what a star has to say more than we

value others opinions is when the star is talking about a subject that he/she specializes in. for example, if a

basketball player is giving his/her opinion on how his/her team will do in the play-offs, then one should probably

take the opinion to heart. everyone has his/her own field of expertise. if stars, or regular persons for that matter,

are talking about their professions, they are bound to have extensive knowledge on the subject.

in conclusion, i do not think that we should listen to the opinions of stars unless they are speaking on a

matter that they specialize in. regular people have just as well thought out knowledgeable opinions as the stars,

sometimes even more so. unfortunately, many young adults idolize these stars and believe everything they say.

because of this, it is important for stars to be careful about passing on inaccurate information.

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1. people attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). why do you think people attend college or university? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

people attend colleges or universities for a lot of different reasons. i believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase their knowledge of themselves and the world around them.

career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. for many, this is the primary reason to go to college, they know that the job market is competitive. at college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. this means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.

also, students go to colleges and universities to have new experiences. this often means having the opportunity to meet people different from those in their hometowns. for most students, going to college is the first time they’ve been away from home by themselves. in additions, this is the first time they’ve had to make decisions on their own. making these decisions increases their knowledge of themselves.

besides looking for self-knowledge, people also attend a university or college to expand their knowledge in subjects they find interesting. for many, this will be their last chance for a long time to learn about something that doesn’t relate to their career.

i would recommend that people not be so focused on a career. they should go to college to have new experiences and learn about themselves and the world they live in.

2.do you agree or disagree with the following statement? parents are the best teachers. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

throughout my life, i have been lucky enough to have a very good relationship with my parents. they have supported me, given me necessary criticism, and taught me a great deal about how to live my life. parents can be very important teachers in our lives; however, they are not always the best teachers.

parents may be too close to their children emotionally. sometimes they can only see their children though the eyes of a protector. for example, they may limit a childs freedom in the name of safety. a teacher might see a trip to a big city as a valuable new experience. however, it might seem too dangerous to a parent.

another problem is that parents may expect their childrens interests to be similar to their own. they cant seem to separate from their children in their mind. if they love science, they may try to force their child to love science too. but what if their childs true love is art, or writing, or car repair?

parents are usually eager to pass on their value to their children. but should children always believe what their parents do? maybe different generations need different ways of thinking. when children are young, they believe that their parents are always rights. but when they get older, they realize there are other views. sometimes parents, especially older ones, cant keep up with rapid social or technology changes. a student who has friends of all different races and backgrounds at school may find that her parents dont really understand or value the digital revolution. sometimes kids have to find their own ways to what they believe in.

the most important thing to realize is that we all have many teachers in our lives. our parents teach us, our teachers teach us, and our peers teach us. books and newspapers and television also teach us. all of them are valuable.

#( books and newspapers) : books, newspapers

3. nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. has this change improved the way people live? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

the twentieth century has brought with it many advances. with those advances, human lives have changed dramatically. in some ways life is worse, but mostly it is better. changes in

food preparation methods, for example, have improved our lives greatly.

the convenience of preparing food today is amazing. even stoves have gotten too slow for us. microwave cooking is much easier. we can press a few buttons and a meal is completely cooked in just a short time. people used to spend hours preparing an oven-cooked meal, and now they can use that time for other, better things. plus, there are all kinds of portable, prepackaged foods we can buy. heat them in the office microwave, and lunch

at work is quick and easy.

food preparation today allows for more variety. with refrigerators and freezers, we can preserve a lot of different foods in our homes. since technology makes cooking so much faster, people are willing to make several dishes for even a small meal. parents are more likely to let children be picky,

now that they can easily heat them up some prepackaged macaroni and cheese on the side. needless to say, adults

living in the same house may have very different eating habits as well. if they don’t want to cook a lot of different dishes, it’s common now to eat out at restaurants several times a week.

healthful eating is also easier than ever now. when people cook, they use new fat substitutes and cooking sprays to cut fat and calories. this reduces the risk of heart disease and high cholesterol. additionally, we can buy fruits and vegetable fresh, frozen or canned. they are easy to prepare, so many of us eat more of those nutritious items daily. a hundred years ago, you couldn’t imagine the process of taking some frozen fruit and ice from the freezer, adding some low-fat yogurt from a plastic cup and some juice from a can in the refrigerator, and whipping up a low-fat smoothie in the blender!

our lifestyle is fast, but people still like good food. what new food preparation technology has given us is more choices. today, we can prepare food that is more convenient, healthier, and of greater variety than ever before in history.

4. it has been said, “not every thing that is learned is contained in books.” compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. in your opinion, which source is more important? why?

and earn a living.

nevertheless, i think that the most important lessons can’t be taught;

they have to be experienced. no one can teach us how to get along with others or how to have self-respect. as we grow from children into teenagers, no one can teach us how to deal with peer pressure. as we leave adolescence behind and enter adult life, no one can teach us how to fall in love and get married.

this shouldn’t stop us from looking for guidelines along the way. teachers and parents are valuable sources of advice

when we’re young. as we enter into new stages in our lives, the advice we receive from them is very helpful because they have already bad similar experiences. but experiencing our own triumphs and disasters is really the only way to learn how to deal with life.

5. a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. do you support or oppose the factory? explain your position.

new factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. however, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. that is why i oppose the plan to build a factory near my community.

i believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. in particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. factories bring smog and pollution. in the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. having a factory is not worth that rise.

of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. our population will grow. to accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. do we really want this much growth, so fast? if our town is going in growth, i would prefer slow growth with good planning. i don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. our quality of life must be considered.

i believe that this growth will change our city too much. i love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. it is also easy

to travel here. if we must expand to hold new citizens, the

small-town feel will be gone. i mould miss that greatly.

a factory would be helpful in some ways. however, i feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. i cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.

6. ma if you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

if i could change one thing about my hometown, i think it would be the fact that theres no sense of community here. people dont feel connected, they dont look out for each other, and they dont get to know their neighbors.

people come and go a lot here. they change jobs frequently and move on. this means that they dont put down roots in the community. they dont join community organizations and

theyre not willing to get involved in trying to improve the quality of life. if someone has a petition to put in a new street light, she has a very hard time getting a lot of people to sign. they dont feel it has anything to do with them. they dont get involved in improving the schools because they dont think the quality of education is important to their lives. they dont see

the connection between themselves and the rest of their community.

people dont try to support others around them. they dont keep a friendly eyes on their children, or check in on older

folks if they dont see them for a few days. theyre not aware when people around them may be going through a hard time. for example, they may not know if a neighbor loses a loved one. theres not a lot of community support for individuals.

neighbors dont get to know each other. again, this is because people come and go within a few years. so when neighbors go on vacation, no one is keeping an eye on their house. no one is making sure nothing suspicious is going on there, like lights in the middle of the night. when neighbors children are cutting across someones lawn on their bikes, theres no friendly way of casually mentioning the problem. people immediately act as if its a major property disagreement.

my hometown is a nice place to live in many ways, but it would be much nice if we had that sense of community.

#2-4(street light) : streetlight

7 how do movies or television influence people’s behavior? use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. do movies and television affect our behavior? a special concern is whether movies and television make children and society more violent. i believe that movies and television do influence our behavior, both for the better and for the worse.

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新托福185道作文题目分类 2008年10月13日星期一 现象的原因分析 1. 上大学的原因1 2. 工作的原因48 3. 电影普及原因180 4. 参观博物馆的原因12 5. 长寿的原因21 6. 冒险体育或其它危险活动43 7. 国外读书的原因168 8. 音乐为什么重要169 9. 礼物为什么被记住161 选择+陈述理由 比较类型 1. 工作：大公司V 小公司47 2. 工作：手工V 机器101 = 104 3. 工作：被雇佣V 自雇佣64 4. 工作：雇人低薪新手V 高薪经验67 5. 工作：高薪高密度V 低薪多自由71 6. 工作：团队V 独立78 7. 生活：儿童成长城市V 农村20 8. 生活：大城市V 小城市你的选择9 9. 生活：室内V 室外 10. 生活：吃饭在家V 饭店？你的选择13 11. 生活：住所传统V 现代144 12. 生活：住所固定V改变你的选择？31 13. 生活：变化V 习惯不变118 14. 生活：住所气候变化分明V 气候稳定不变91 15. 生活：早起V 晚起 45 16. 生活：电影严肃V 娱乐57 17. 生活: 假期长V 短143 18. 生活：室友选择V 规定安排99 19. 生活：大学住宿舍V 租房105 20. 生活：快V 慢节奏59 21. 生活：自由时间规划V 随心115

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