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第十八周图画作文

[学审题谋篇]

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(2016·辽宁省葫芦岛市一模)如今随着智能手机和电子设备的普及，

“低头族”现象兴起。人们沉溺于手机等电子设备，因而忽略了自己

和他人的沟通交流，甚至在家庭聚会上也只顾玩手机不和长辈聊天，使老人感到失落万分。请根据图画写一篇英语短文。

内容要点如下：

1．描述图画内容；

2．对图中现象加以分析；

3．针对这个现象提出建议。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

1．审题

图画作文要审清题意，看懂图画所表达的意思，紧扣主题。审题时应做到三定：①定体裁；

②定人称；③定时态。

如本文为夹叙夹议文；在叙述时和就图画议论时主要用第三人称，表述自己观点时用第一人称；时态主要用一般现在时。

2．谋篇

图画类作文以图画形式给出信息，所以需要抓住图画所传递的信息，将图画信息转化为文字要点。

如本文可以从三个方面进行描述：首先叙述图画内容；然后介绍图画所反映的社会现象；最后陈述应该怎样去做。

[学增分亮点]

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①As can be seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner. ②But when they sit down to table, the young just bury themselves in playing with their cellphones, totally ignoring their parents, who feel very lonely and sad.

③There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative effect on our lives. ④Heavy use of cellphones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders

more lonely. ⑤Worse still, addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’poor performance at school, which adds to the elders’worries. ⑥As far as I’m concerned, it’s necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones. ⑦And I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.

[满分缘由]

1．结构布局

本文可分为两段：

第一段：介绍图画内容，全家人正在聚餐，但年轻人却在玩手机，完全不顾父母的感受；

第二段：陈述“低头族”这种社会现象，并就此现象提出了自己的看法。

2．亮点词汇

bury oneself in, have an effect on, widen, add to, as far as ...concerned, face to face, harmonious

3．亮点句式

第①句包含as引导的非限制性定语从句；

第②句包含when引导的时间状语从句、现在分词作状语和who引导的非限制性定语从句；

第⑤句包含which引导的非限制性定语从句；

第⑦句包含it作形式宾语和which引导的非限制性定语从句。

[句式改写]

1．用名词性从句改写句①

What_can_be_seen_from_the_picture_is_that_a_big_family_gets_together_to_have_a_big_ dinner.

2．用动名词作主语和现在分词作结果状语改写⑤

Worse_still,_being_addicted_to_cellphones_might_also_lead_to_teenagers’

_poor_performance_at_school,_thus_adding_to_the_elders’_worries.

3．用被动语态改写句⑥

As_far_as_I’m_concerned,_it’

s_necessary_that_the_time_we_spend_using_cellphones_should_be_limited.

[写满分作文]

—————————————————————————————————————(2016·龙岩市质检)如何衡量一个人真正的品质，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语，结合图片所提示的信息，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

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