Are We More Connected or More Alone？105

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？

姓名：闫子萱学校：延边大学分数：92

Currently,it is universally acknowledged that quantities of contrivances particularly the online are in a state of continuous development.With the constant progress of multifarious communicators,we are apparently more connected than before.Undoubtedly,our ability to connect with other people certainly makes it easier for us to get in touch with more people and to cognize more new things.Nevertheless,I argue that we are actually more alone and lose fairly a few opportunities to feel in real life on account of the thing that we spend too much time connecting online.We are only more on the network to socialize rather than as before and talk to people face to face.

Previously,it is needless to say that various technologies such as the tools which are relevant to the connections between people are increasingly applied to communicate.Obviously,people indeed can make a conversation with their friends or fairly a few strangers in the form of the words whereas it is conceivable that it is hard for the net to transmit our emotions,which means that the relationship between people seems to be increasingly intimate whereas people are more alone as it is.Subsequently,there is no denying that we lose lots of chances to feel the real life on account of depending too much on the net.To name it a few,we are gradually accustomed to express ourselves on the net instead of directly sharing their success or joys to other people,which will diminish the feelings of reality beyond doubt.

As far as I am concerned,we actually require attempting to connect with other people face to face rather than excessively rely on various communicators,which will ultimately make us become more connected other than more alone.